Sunday, January 24, 2010

My Best Friend


Thanks for being my friend.

You are the one who showed me what is meant by a friend.

Before,I had no one to share my thoughts

Now I have you to share whatever I think.

Itried but failed to love others;

But then you came and taught me to first love myself.

I used to fail in every test,

But you said, "Don't worry,

just give your best and leave the rest.”

Whenever I felt depressed and cried

for rest,

You came with zest and made

me refreshed.

Whenever my mind showed me the

reasons why I will fall,

You told me the causes why

I will stand tall.

Under pressure I could only get twisted

and bend,

You told me to win by fighting till the

end.

Before,I lived my past,destroyed my

present and worried about my future

Now,I leave my past,live my present & build my future.

Thanks to you again that you made me

think Big and taught me,

"Where there is a will, there is a way.

Where there is friendship,there is not a life-skip."

5 comments:

  1. This is my first poem since I joined GCECT..

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  2. Just maintain the depth in your inner soul.Treasure the friendship...Mature writing....Keep nurturing this talent...

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  3. Sorry I strongly criticize.There should be no term such as "Best friend" as comparison among friends makes the very definition of friendship meaningless.......Still a good poem..Keep it up.

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  4. the last comment is true but the context is very good. :D

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